Unshapely Things (Mark Del Franco)
4
I picked up the first two books of this series because another author I really liked did a blurb for them, Rob Thurman. I love the Cal Leandros series and was looking for another urban fantasy with a male lead. This book has a familiar premise in urban fantasies, a hero (or heroine) with magical links/abilities works to solve cases involving supernaturals. I'm completely on board. The hero's a druid - cool. However, this book didn't grab me the way "Nightlife" did. It was a lot slower than I expected, and had two big flaws that I really hope are ironed out in the next book.
One thing bothered me right off, mainly because it is becoming fairly common and I don't like the trend. The hero (heroine) is dirt poor and/or disgraced in the supernatural community. Harry Dresden can barely pay his rent, and wizards look down on him. Rachel Morgan was fired and would be on the street if not for Ivy. Even Cal can't afford a new jacket - he spends what little money they get on weapons because they're on the run. Connor Grey lost everything, his status, his high-rise condo, his job and his power when he lost most of his magical abilities. We learn that he was an arrogant prick, and near-celebrity, before he was injured. Even worse, he has no real ally. Yes, Connor works with a human detective and they mutually respect each other. But it's not a partnership yet. That coupled with his crappy life - magically disabled, forced to live in the seedy side of town in a rundown apartment, unable to order take-out because he has no cash to tip, rivals from his former job - makes the book damn depressing. I need something to root for!
The second problem I had was that this felt like a traditional detective story with supernatural elements thrown on top of it. The novel is slowed down dramatically by detailed descriptions of fey politics. Now, I have raved in other series about how interesting vampire politics are. I had to think on why it didn't quite work for me here - they are just like human politics today. In one passage, Del Franco describes how the dwarves and elves in Germany had formed a consortium and when the Berlin wall went down they had to create a "fey demilitarized zone." The different fey are prejudiced against each other (like current race relations) and then we have the Guild duking it out with the Boston PD over jurisdiction, like the FBI and local police. And the murder victims are male prostitutes. Oh - but they are fairies! It was just too close to reality, and I get enough of that on the news and Law and Order. I want escapism.
However, the series has potential to be more. First, I like that it isn't predicated on the same old vampires and werewolves. The fey consist of fairies, elves, dwarves, druids, etc. The first two thirds of the book was a solid 3 stars mystery. The ending, though, was fantastic and earned another star. Lots of twists came together, there was a good battle and the little guys came out on top. I will read book 2. Connor Grey is the typical, honorable hero and I like that. He resents that the Guild won't investigate the murders because it's "just" prostitutes, and feels compelled to keep investigating. Connor being a druid (and not a wizard, or half-breed supernatural) is fresh and original, and the crimes do have a ritualistic nature. Connor's a well-fleshed out character. The idea of someone powerful being humbled and seeing how the other half must live, often without justice, has merit. But, wouldn't it be nice for them to have a powerful champion instead of someone barely surviving himself? The secondary characters are also well developed. Joe the Flit reminds me a lot of Jenx in the Rachel series - funny, loyal and invaluable. The human cop Murdock is a good by-the-book cop who compliments Connor very well. Even minor characters stand out, like Briallen the Druidess. Overall, the cast is engaging, and now that the stage is set, perhaps I can escape into the supernatural. I just hope the politicing doesn't consume the series.